FIRST DRAFT FRENZY:
Something happened.
"Oh, no!" said someone.
Disaster.
"I can't --"
"Yes, you can."
"No!"
Development.
"Wait!"
"Never."
More development.
"No!"
Only by the light of winter stars can
the dreaming mind accept mortality.
And then --
"Try!"
"I'm trying!"
"Try harder!"
A fallen leaf sails away on a film of
petroleum colours.
Reversal.
Opaque epiphany.
Reversal.
Opaque epiphany.
"No!"
Climax.
Coda.
"Nothing, all around us! Nothing!"
The End.
OHHHHHHH... THAT FELT GOOD.
I CAN EXPAND IT LATER.
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